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__The ghost village__

A long time ago some teenagers heard a story of a bewitched city in which there were lots of evil spirits.

One day they decided to go there. After three hours journey on a car a policeman stopped them and they were asked to go out of the car. They went out of the car and the policeman started to shoot the car until it exploted. The teenagers started to run and when they stopped running they saw that the policeman had disappeared. They began to walk to find a safe place and two hours later of walking they found a small village, so they began to explore the village. There was no body in the village, so they decided to explore and find a phone. When they were walking they began to listen to a girl's voice that scaried them, it was the voice of a girl that said ¨get me out of here!¨. When they turned around they found a telephone so they try to use it.

When they put the telephone in their ear the teenagers listened the girl's voice saying on the phone "turn around", so they turned around and a small girl was standing there with blood on her face. She asked them if she could taste their blood. That night was the last day of life of the tennagers.

Paolo Orrego

NOTE: Very nice story Paolo. You can publish it now. CONGRATS!!